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kisses
By no1butClo
24 December 2006
A recent encounter in the workplace inspired this one.

I don't think there's actualy anything there in it though. Comments welcome as ever

Merry Christmas ^__^

He was Sicilian, twenty five
with a boyish smile. Pumped
up slicked back and ready for
service - our youngest Maitre 'De.

In passing, he would call me
'baby'; a wink and a pout as
he sent me out with yet another
stack of napkins. But he didn't

quite get it. Couldn't fathom why
I joked with Chef, left kisses in the air
for anybody - I had them round my
little fingers. So when he left, back

to his family at the Big Hotel, and
he asked 'Do you love me?' in a quiet
moment, I couldn't help but smile to the
sound of Spanish love-songs

and toss another wink at Chef,
watching in the doorway.

Reviews
Can I have one? :)
Written by kitten_princess (31 comments posted) 29th December 2006
I mean a cute Sicilian waiter, not a kiss from you :P:P 
 
Something nice and light before I try and untangle Ribbons... :grin 
 
Kitten xx

Written by gutterkitty (362 comments posted) 31st December 2006
I think this is really great, and deserving of more reviews. Such are the hazards of posting at Christmas time! 
Even if there isn't much to it, it's well written and I like the way the lines are divided and also the stanza arrangement. It seems very well put together and I love the line "I had them round my little fingers". A really enjoyable read :)

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