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The Howgills
Written by fellpony
30 December 2006
My first encounter with the Eastern Lake District (where I now live) was seeing the massive shapes of the Howgill Fells through the windows of a train en route to Scotland. I was amazed then, and am still amazed now when I live so close to them, by the brooding power of these strange, smooth hills.  They are neither of the Lakes nor of the Pennines. Wainwright called them "sleeping elephants." They border the Lune Gorge, through which runs one of the most ancient trackways in the area, a route that the British and the Romans adopted, then the droveways and toll roads, to be followed by the railway and finally the motorway of modern times. I could write a learned article about the facts, but no medium but poetry can embody the atmosphere. Does it work?


Their sandaled feet marched northward
    on a straight well cambered road,
Newly laid of small clean stone
    according to Roman code.


Your wheels go by on the tarmac
    with a noise like monstrous bees,
Propelled by hopes of pleasure
    among rocks and fells and trees.
You don your sturdy rucksacks
    and your high tech walking boots,
Study your Wainwright and hope you can find
    his illustrated routes.

The Roman swords were ready
    for the ambush should it come,
But our steep banked woods were silent
    and the marching road was dumb.


In the two thousand years between you,
    give or take a hundred or two,
We have compelled your lines so close,
    the old beneath the new,
That the cambered road of the Romans
    lies within your motorway fence,
And your railway shoulders the bank-and-wall
    of Agricola’s defence.

We have squeezed all into the valley,
    so we watch with calm disdain.
The Romans have gone, and you will go.

    We will be alone again.


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Hi fellpony
Written by jean.day (2257 comments posted) 30th December 2006
My husband, who used to teach at Sedbergh School, says he knows well the Howgill Fells. 
 
My main memories of those hills is of getting absolutely soaking wet, walking for miles and miles in fog, without seeing much of anything, but I have to admit they are beautiful.  
 
Nice poem.

Written by fellpony (1580 comments posted) 30th December 2006
Hi Jean, thanks. Your husband probably also knows that it was a teacher from Sedbergh School who first did an excavation of the Roman Road in the Lune Gorge.  
 
Soaking wet and miles of fog is about right just now. Oh, and wind of course. 
 
Sue

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 30th December 2006
Liked this, very evocative and thought the italics worked well. Really interesting read. 
 
Elli

Written by rilLie (327 comments posted) 30th December 2006
I liked this as well. :grin

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