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| By gutterkitty | ||||||||
| 31 December 2006 | ||||||||
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Not sure about this one. Seems to lack originality. What do you think? My sensitivity drives you crazy. Sometimes I think you will pick up a broom to sweep away so many eggshells. Or walk without trepidation until my fears are spelt in dust upon the floor. I'll kneel down and try to cup the powder with a palm, apologising. And while I'm down there, trying to clean up my mess, you're demanding I pay attention. Wiping my hands on my jeans, I still can't look at you. The dust lines my throat. I cough out words, shuffle the letters on the floor with a toe. I'm so busy trying to find a path through all these cracking, splitting sounds, I don't realise eggshells are falling from the sky.
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