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Tables turned
Written by fellpony
01 January 2007
What goes around comes around. I was very glad to have proof that I am not the only absent minded person in the village.

Chris was bringing his sheep back onto the fields through our yard, back sometime in July.

“Been worming them?” I enquired, as we paused to shut the gate behind them.

“Clippin',” said Chris laconically.

I felt rather silly for not noticing that the ewes wandering over the sun-baked grass looked rather naked compared to their appearance only a few hours before. After all, we used to farm; not seeing such a basic piece of stock-work seemed evidence of lunacy. But Chris didn't say anything more on the subject and we talked of other things.

In mid December, Chris and his Dad, Willy, were up in the yard, checking and feeding the now-pregnant ewes. Graham and I were out also and despite the chilly weather we all gathered beside the same field-gate to pass the time of day and set the world to rights. Willy glanced round our yard and said, “Nice lot of logs there. Where'd you get them from?”

Graham gestured at the nearest corner of the midden, some ten yards away. “Felled those two trees that aren't there any more.”






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Written by Phil (6838 comments posted) 1st January 2007
Nice piece, well told. Funny how we notice the small details but often miss the huge ones. 
 
Phil.

Written by johniebg (553 comments posted) 8th January 2007
oh how we laugh ... and don't spot the obvious! I used to have a living room sized lawn out front of my house with a concrete path that ran along the side. Smack in the middle was a large true, about 20 foot high that used to rain lovely white petals on everyones lawn for a while each spring (you may know its name, I dont). In the winter of 2002 my neighbour knocked on my front door one night and enquired when I would be disposing of my tree. A little perplexed I enquired as to why I would want to dispose of my tree? at which point, somewhat surprised she turned and pointed to my path. Apparently the strong winds the weekend before had blown it over, covering almost all my lawn and a good portion of my path. Somehow, I had managed to get up, go to work having walked around the tree, get home having walked back around the same and never noticed. It was a standing joke (is still mentioned when I make my annual pilgrimage back) in the local country pub that stands right up there with the time I mistook a male pheasant for a female peacock ... thats another story though.
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Written by johniebg (553 comments posted) 8th January 2007
the bit everyone thought was funny was that I did the walking round tree thing for three days..

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