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By patterjack
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01 January 2007 |
The Bird of Time has but a little way,
To fly - and Lo! the Bird is on the Wing Auspicium
Divination by birds.
I've never looked to cards to tell my chances;
the stars in their courses I've long set aside;
I know no Sybils in their deep drugged trances;
Gypsies and crystal balls I've never tried --
They'd uncover secrets I would rather hide.
I have given up on numbers , they reel past
like symbols on a spinning fruit machine
in fixed or random order , but inexorably at last
I only know the jackpot will have been
the final numbers I'll have ever seen .
No chicken entrails have spread upon the block
foretelling what's to come ; no slaughtered ox has bled ;
no runes have spoken , carved upon a rock;
I have not called up spirits of the dead
nor read a future on my palm outspread.
No carefully laid i-ching or tarot card
nor anything from dreams or second sight
have shown me promises ; sortilege is too hard.
But still I find my auguries of delight
in hearing the song of passing birds in flight . |
Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 1st January 2007 | And what do they tell you? Or is it enough to hear the song and know you're there to enjoy it? Some poems I read and can see quality but I don't connect. I saw quality in this and connected. Wonderful. (Not kind, just honest.) Phil. | Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3362 comments posted) 2nd January 2007 | I can echo Phil here, often I can appeciate that a poem may be good but not have any emotional connection to it but the sentiments here really moved me. What a wonderful note to start the new year on. In fact put this to music and it would do instead of that dreary mawkish Auld Lang Syne" Wouldn't that be good? Sublime J | Written by francoise (129 comments posted) 11th January 2007 | lovely lovely lovely... reading the last couplet gave me exactly the same feeling of having just finished a great novel with a satisfying ending... i sighed with happiness after reading this piece... absolutely wonderful fran | Written by Witzl (1585 comments posted) 12th January 2007 | | This is just beautiful, Patterjack, poignant and haunting. |
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