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By BuffaloBill
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03 January 2007 |
I've never tried a Haiku before; they're nice and simple, aren't they? As you breathed your last I held your frail hand in mine And you smiled and went. |
Written by Phil (6713 comments posted) 3rd January 2007 | Yep, nice and simple on the surface. The very best are layered with meaning.
Liked this one.
Phil. |
Written by JourneyAtNight (314 comments posted) 3rd January 2007 | Yes, I liked this too. Haikus - short, but with much depth.
Best wishes,
E |
Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 4th January 2007 | Liked this as far as it went though I would have liked more 'layers' to it...
Elli |
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