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| Friendship Frayed (revised) | |
| By JourneyAtNight | ||||||||||
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I did some minor tweaking...no great changes. Frustration boils, the pressure of his words tipping her cover as guilt overflows unable to return what he left there... left lingering there Those wretched words slowly tearing her perfect picture to pieces - her work of art. Friendship defaced. Anger grows and divides towards him. For a selfish confession ignorantly spoken. For leaving her with this black weight to carry on her back. And towards herself - Her own blind and tactless ways, too many smiles, too much eyelash. And now only awkward silences and indecisive eyes remain to deepen the pain, the presence of a threadbare bond.
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