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A Fair Warning
By rilLie
06 January 2007
ok you probably who don't know who he is..... to those who don't know... Kean is this lead singer for Calla Lily, a local band who played during our legacy last night, January 5, 2007 and he's my husband, okay? Okay.. maybe my second husband.. ((my first was wolfram)) but he's still my husband, mehn!!!
whole story is in my journal.. http://rillie.deviantart.com
anyway..
we had our legacy last night.. it's this concert you have when you're graduating in our school.. in my case, i'm graduating from Elementary, Grade 7. Next year i'm in High School already... so the way it went, there were the student bands who played for the crowd, then our batch dance, then our class dances, and group dances and then the prayer and then the guest bands: Calla Lily (where my dear, Kean is from), Bloomfields, Luke Mejares and Thor.. you probably don't know these guys, but they rocked, mehn!!! anyway.. i'm shutting up now..... XD

Attention all the ladies
who're dumb enough to think
that Kean could be theirs, well no,
I'm his everything.


He's my husband, you should know
and he's very much all mine.
So if you think you've got a chance,
you're so out of your mind.


So you shrieking broads,
please remember this well:
If you ever come near my guy,
you'll meet your coffin then.

Reviews

Written by Phil (6635 comments posted) 6th January 2007
Had a quick look at your DA, I've got an account there too. 
 
http://phil776.deviantart.com/ 
 
Hope you had a good night. 
 
Phil.

Written by Talisker (1321 comments posted) 6th January 2007
Far too young to get married! 
 
Hope you enjoyed the concert. 
 
Oli :grin

Written by rilLie (327 comments posted) 6th January 2007
lol. thanks. :grin  
 
phil -- saw your da.. left a comment, hope you don't mind. :grin  
 
oli -- haven't you ever heard of the saying 'it's never too early'?!? :grin and of course, the concert rocked. 
 
thanks again. :grin

Written by JourneyAtNight (314 comments posted) 7th January 2007
This made me giggle rilLie. I've decided that I'm going to marry Johnny Depp, never mind silly rumours of him being married to some french model....;) 
 
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Written by wattle (117 comments posted) 7th January 2007
A lovely ditti from an 'old' 'married' lady. Thank you

Written by rilLie (327 comments posted) 8th January 2007
JAN - lol.. Johnny Depp, too, is one of my crushes. :grin who cares about the rumours, ne? 
 
Wattle - thank you. :grin

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