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You Complete Me
By Talisker
06 January 2007
For Weasel.

You complete me.

Without you I am like
a bicycle without wheels,
interesting, useless.

Without you I am like
a planet with no orbit,
off-centre, directionless.

Without you I am like
an uprooted tree
enfeebled, languishing.

Without you I am like
an unheard prayer
futile, a waste of breath.

We are more
than the sum of our parts

Together we are perfect symmetry
perfect harmony, perfect love.

Thank you for completing me.


Oli 06/01/07

Reviews

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 6th January 2007
Aw Oli you big softy! Simple, sweet and splendid. I thought this was lovely. 
 
Elli

Written by fellpony (1618 comments posted) 6th January 2007
I like it Oli - hope the relationship stays that way. 
 

Written by LynB (435 comments posted) 6th January 2007
That's a beautiful poem, Oli - it's the simplicity that makes it so, if that makes sense (probably not, but I hope you know what I mean!)

Written by Phil (6738 comments posted) 6th January 2007
Lovely Oli, appeals to the practical romantic in me. Not without humour, verse one raised a smile. 
 
Phil. 
 

Written by rilLie (327 comments posted) 6th January 2007
it's so sweet!!!! huggles.... sniff sniff... It's so cute.. :D personally liked the part with the unheard prayer part...  
 
rilLie

Written by JourneyAtNight (314 comments posted) 7th January 2007
I can't really add anything to what has already been said. Just lovely!  
 
Cheers, 
 
E:)

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