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By Talisker
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08 January 2007 |
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He started, now he's finished. |
Written by coosh (864 comments posted) 8th January 2007 | | A tad prolix for my taste. If you can't reduce text to bare bones, like Mango, then at least format it as a sodding script. Enter Stage Right. Exeunt. |
Written by Talisker (1326 comments posted) 8th January 2007 | Methinks you don't get it, David! I guess you're no "mastermind"!  |
Written by coosh (864 comments posted) 8th January 2007 | | Mum's gone to Iceland. Methinks it still reads like too much of a Norse saga. Reduce to one word: "Pass". |
Written by LynB (435 comments posted) 8th January 2007 | Less isn't always more. I loved this, Oli - a perfect tribute.  |
Written by Phil (6713 comments posted) 8th January 2007 | Magnus Passedon almost works. Liked yours so much more.
You could have sold this one to the Reykjavík Evening News if you'd been quick enough. Do you think they go for puns up there?
Phil. | Letters & words
Written by bwoz (125 comments posted) 5th February 2007 | 23 letters, seven syllables, five words, three punctuation marks, one sentence. It is a complete story, it has a start, a middle (the comma), and a finish -- and it describes so very well the human condition.
I probably don't get it either, but it could be humorous in the right company.
BW
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Written by Amelia (30 comments posted) 4th December 2007 | | Too bad that's a comma splice. |
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