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| Oh me! | |
| By deathstillness | ||||||||||
| 09 January 2007 | ||||||||||
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A try. I was inspired by Phil's poem. I wanted to find a way to express how I felt after reading the poem. Because I am still confused the poem is not yet clear. Me, oh me when I die. It tastes when I am dragged Awful just as if I am me I grin, moan, and sigh! My eyes petraying me Oh me! when I am blinded, I see non, but only me I see My time, your only time. Time passed, my soul passed No one is waiting, Should there be any, dragged! Oh, awful sound the sand is dropping. Oh me I am no longer me All I see I can any longer see But me, alone I am alone!
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