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Poetry
Sad Ballad
By LissetteLV
10 January 2007
I wrote this for my english class and many of my peers liked it so i wanted to share it to others

strange little girl who is crying.
along with the sad rain
realized she herself was dying,
from all the lies and pain.

she is silent as air can be
its if she lost her voice.
he made her see her fault for
she had no other choice.

a sad failing relationship
it is what ended her
her life became devasted,
everything was a blur.

she's on her knees begging weakly
for reconciliation
but gets rejected so deeply.
its a gloom sensation

he was a cruel heartless person,
this nightmare wont decay.
he would remain in memory
tormenting her everyday.

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