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| One Night | |
| By creative_novice | ||||||||
| 15 June 2005 | ||||||||
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This is one of my first ever pieces of poetry, so to be honest I'm not sure if it will seem quite polished. I'd be grateful for any comments....... There as I lay, unable to rest, I gazed across, at her beautiful breast, I had known her this way, on that night alone, The following night, I knew she'd be home, A long way away, that is for sure, To a place I have never, been before,
I know not of love, so of that, I can't speak, I know only that, she makes me feel weak, I was sure with a few days I'd be forgotten, Just because my name was now at the bottom, Didn't mean that others would not come after, Like the many who had gone before,
Dangerous she was you see, For from my yearning, I now cannot flee, I know to call her, would only cause pain, And that I only have, myself to blame, I don't see her, the way the others do, I want her for longer, it's foolish but true, To me she's more, than what she seems, To others she is, a perfect dream, They come, they go, it suits them just fine, But me, I want her, to be mine,
It was never supposed, to be this way, I never thought, I'd want her to stay, On my clothes, I still smell her, but it won't be for long, As they must be washed, so that she'll be gone, As now I must return, to where I belong, To the one who loves me, who has done me no wrong, That night must be erased, never spoken of again, Or else I'll cause another, a great deal of pain.
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