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Fragile
By amanda4uk
11 January 2007
Written by 'the imaginary man'.

Fragile and pale,

Her skin like a veil

Reflecting the glow of the sun.

As she spoke in a whisper

I kissed her, hoping that she wouldn’t run.


One single tear

Rolled down past her ear,

Her eyes looked hollow and sad.

My words started to crumble

Into a jumble, she was driving me mad.


Sitting for hours

With her mystical powers,

I’d become deeply intoxicated.

Rational thoughts left my head,

Fear had fled, now totally emancipated.


She came to me,

So all others could see

That every ounce of her, every bone,

Even her mouth and the white skin

She was in, was meant just for me, alone.

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