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By JourneyAtNight
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12 January 2007 |
I'm disgustingly lazy with titles.
It's exam time again, oh joy. I would be fine if it weren't for the tiny little factor of time. Time A big white circle with black turning hands. Plastic Not a laugh, or a song, No whisper of inspiration. But still, there she is, watching our every move Why should we have to abide by her cold monotonous rules? Every tick followed by tock Like a prodding finger on my shoulder Nagging It doesn’t matter how hard I try, It’s never good enough. When I look away I swear she plays tricks on me. Just to be cruel. How can half an hour go by in five minutes? It’s impossible She knows that better than anyone. She does it on purpose, I know it. But as soon as I look around again She returns to her ticking and her tocking. Just as before.
It’s ten to two already. She just smirks at me Smug, knowing that she beat me again.
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Written by Talisker (1367 comments posted) 12th January 2007 | Ah yes, the old chestnut. I had a debate on here recently about time - does it actually exist? We know that it is "relative" because of that wee fellow Albert Einstein, I argue that time is just a human concept, i.e. animals have either no concept of it, or a radically different one. You are right that our perception of the passing of "time" changes with circumstances, or is it actually time that changes? Good luck with the zams, try not to make an Esra of them! Oli | Written by ellipinnock (1816 comments posted) 12th January 2007 | I was so glad when my finals were finished and I knew that it would be 3 years until I had to take another which would be a viva rather than a written exam So I sympathise! I thought it a bit prosy in places. I liked the last three lines very mcuh thought they made for a strong ending. Worth hacking at a bit IMO Elli | Written by Phil (8763 comments posted) 12th January 2007 | Liked this. Yes prosy, but not in an unpoetic way. I liked the direct nature of this. Suits the simple me. Funny, if I've ever thought of it at all, I've though of time as a him (don't know why) but the devious nature you give it, she must be female. (I'm ducking. ) In my defence, a man wouldn't have the intelligence or guile to be so full of trickery. Phil. | Time is... Written by dante8 (9 comments posted) 14th June 2007 | On the question of time, might I ask if anyone knows how long the present is? I mean, there must be one. We have a future and a past, so there must be a link, which is the present. But how long is that? Regarding the poem; very nice. I concur, a little prosy, but then again I like prose. So I like it. |
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