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The Comfort Of The Manly Snore
By sara
15 June 2005

I don't want him as a partner
I'm quite happy on my own
I don't want his lies or deviousness
I just want sex and nothing less
His night time presence, nothing more
The comfort of the manly snore

I don't want him permanently
I'm doing alright as I am
I don't want his washing or general mess
I just want passion and nothing less
His night time presence, nothing more
The comfort of the manly snore

I don't want his false friendship
I'm feeling fine being alone
I don't want his love or possessiveness
I just want fun and nothing less
His night time presence, nothing more
The comfort of the manly snore

 

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Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 16th June 2005
another good piece, i feel some longing here ?
The comfort of the Mandly Snore
Written by Ladybird (32 comments posted) 20th June 2005
Enjoyed this Sara- nice flowing words - methinks maipenrai maybe right! 
Ladybird

Written by Josie (2769 comments posted) 6th April 2006
When people say what you have said, I don't really believe it because most people - women in particular - want the feeling of stableness in their lives - and when, after the passion, the children arrive - don't they need a stable father in their lives. I'm sorry, I may be old fashioned but I don't like your thinking.

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