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By bloodange77
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14 January 2007 |
I wrote this a while ago and I am well aware that it needs work. Forget me not, I pray you. But let me leave, For I have nothing. There is nothing to keep me, So let me weep. I cry for you, My sweet loss. |
Written by Phil (6713 comments posted) 13th January 2007 | As far as I can recollect, this is one of the best things you've posted on here. Not sure about the last two lines, they seem a little Hollywood. Well done.
Phil. | Thank You
Written by bloodange77 (38 comments posted) 20th February 2007 | Thank you so much for your support.
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