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that day, the night we met |
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By alandavidpritchard
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15 June 2005 |
just a little love poem - wanted to keep it simple That day, the night we met
I'm sorry to say
there were no fireworks
that day,
the night we met.
No major pyrotechnics:
the earth,
I recall
did not move,
and the only
rumbling I heard
came from
the belly of someone nearby.
Yet, there was
something
between you and me
I distinctly remember
THAT FIRST LOOK
- it was more than just a glance -
it was
everything
invisibly gorgeous -
the way
gravity
is.
(c) Alan David Pritchard
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Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 15th June 2005 | | excellent |
Written by maj (20 comments posted) 16th June 2005 |
That was so beautiful, touching and sincere.  |
Written by alandavidpritchard (59 comments posted) 16th June 2005 | thanks to both maj and maipenrai for your comments.
Sharing is caring, and we don't have enough of that going round these days. |
Written by sara (29 comments posted) 23rd June 2005 | | Love this poem - simple but says it all ! | Excellent
Written by LaughterLines (34 comments posted) 30th June 2005 | Hi Alan
This is a beautiful poem. If more people shared and cared then the world would be a better place wouldn't it.
Lovely poem. Thanks for the read.
LL |
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