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| Bruiser Moves to Cut Bank - (1765 words) | |
| By wattle | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||
| 15 January 2007 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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wattle - no one special, just a dreamer who found an old pen. ![]() There had been a lot of tension in the house for several months and it looked as if it was coming to a head. Father was out working while Mother and the children were packing everything they valued into the old Chevy wagon. Thus far I was sitting on Josie’s dresser wondering about my value, most of the clothes living in the drawers below me had long since been loaded into the car. Finally, Josie picked me up along with a few puzzles and colouring books, and headed for the car. It seems I am valuable enough to travel on Josie’s lap, a good warm feeling and much better than the prospect of being left with a cranky, no nonsense, cheated, lonely Father. I should explain it is very difficult for a teddy bear to find out what is going on and in particular where we are going. No one takes me seriously and sitting down below the window level I can only guess where we are by the building tops and light poles going past. I know we drove down town and got onto the Trans Canada Highway and even though I heard talk of us going to Regina to live with Mothers parents, while still down town in Calgary we turned off onto Provincial Highway 2 heading south; a mystery. I was in the back sitting on the right, on Josie’s lap, behind Betty who was helping Mother by reading maps and things, explaining where to turn, which is how I found out where we were going. Beside us in the left rear seat was Jason, a sad hyperactive person who delights in flipping, irritating Josie and Betty. We have only been in the car for fifteen minutes and Jason has already been told to stop kicking the back of mothers seat. I almost forgot Bozo is over in the back with the luggage. He is also like Jason and has trouble being still. The light poles were becoming spaced apart and the vehicle building up speed when the mystery was solved, by listening to Betty and Mother. It seems we are going to Lethbridge to stay a night with Mother’s Brother before continuing towards Regina. Mother’s Brother is going to lend us the money to complete the trip. Josie got out her colouring book and I was concentrating on how to join up some dots to make an image, on the page when it started. Jason pinched Josie’s arm, the ensuing exchange of hits and flips knocked me over and alerted Mother who offered a ‘don’t start’ threat. No sooner was I put back on Josie’s lap than Jason grabbed me by the ear and threw me in the back with Bozo which was a terrible thing to happen as Bozo is disgusting, he slobbers on everything and his manners are just like Jason’s. True to form, Bozo picked me up in his mouth and started to shake the stuffing out of me. What happened next I’m not quite sure, I remember seeing Josie and Jason pushing each other while grabbing at me with Bozo resisting aggressively. The next thing I know I’m flying out Jason’s windows doing sumersaults, bouncing several times on the highway, being run over by an eighteen wheeler and two cars, and finally coming to rest upright on the side of the road a little shaken and twisted but otherwise unhurt, save for the harsh reality that my family didn’t even stop to pick me up; bastards. There wasn’t much to do sitting on the side of the road with my whole future in jeopardy. After a few hours feeling somewhat sorry for myself, I started to take in the surroundings and noticed how flat and featureless the country was, save for the patchwork of fences that portioned the scene into large squares. The fields were very green and productive looking, dotted with healthy horses and cattle preoccupied with eating the lush grass on display. There was not a house or person in sight other then the constant rush of traffic hurrying past, totally oblivious to my dilemma. In the distance I could see a truly beautiful blue silhouette of a jagged mountain range jutting into the western skyline. Looking south along the straight carriageway I could make out a large green sign displaying, High River 10km and Fort Macleod 120km. The hours ticked by slowly, I watched the sun sink behind the mountains and were it not for my situation I would have enjoyed the beauty of the crimson glow accompanying the onset of darkness. After a rather long, cool night listening to the constant drum of passing traffic with glaring lights I welcomed the warming sun on my back with some joy. For several hours I tried to pass the time counting cars though I confess I would have been happier if I could have thrown stones at them. Then it happened; a shiny black Mazda MX8 braked heavily, it swung to the curb and backed slowly towards me. A rather well groomed, handsome, middle aged man stepped out, walked around in front of me and in a well spoken gentle voice said, “Hello little fellow, you look lost and lonely. How would you like to come home with me, you can keep me company along the way.” He scooped me up and placed me on the dashboard of his fancy car saying, “You sit up here where you can see out and get yourself warm.” We set off along the road and as we got up to cruising speed the man explained he was on his way to Cut Bank, Montana and he knew a lovely young lady down there who had a soft spot for lost teddy bears. He assured me she would look after a handsome young bear like myself as if I were royalty. Passing the exit sign for High River I noticed the country around the dual-lane divided highway was starting to display the hint of undulations with long gentle sweeping hills, still beautiful, all lush looking with cattle laden fields and occasional building accompanied by large stylish Dutch barns. The Mountains in the west continued to display their impressive form. The man told me how High River was a pretty town with cobblestone pathways winding through it. Many of the building were adorned by colourful murals depicting the local history. High River he told me was an historic location important for the plains Indians, it once located a sacred Medicine Tree on the bank of the Highwood River that was used as a meeting place. We powered onwards through the rich countryside and in what seemed like only a few minutes we were approaching Fort Macleod. There didn’t seem to be much of the town to see but the man explained it was a very important historical town, being the place where the original Royal Canadian Mounted Police was formed and it was the oldest settlement in the Canadian West. While slowing to exit at Fort Macleod the man explained how the fastest way to Cut Bank was to change to Highway 3, which would be straight ahead, travelling east, to Lethbridge then south, changing onto Interstate 15 at the USA border and at Shelby west onto US Highway 2 to Cut Bank. But we were exiting to take the scenic route remaining on Highway 2 until it becomes US 89, down towards East Glacier where we would turn east on US Highway 2, towards Cut Bank. He said it was more fun to go this way, as everyone else would go the other way and leave us alone to take in the views along the way. In order to continue south on Highway 2 we had to negotiate several tight interlinked round-a-bouts, all rather confusing for a little bear but the man had no trouble, as his car had been here before and kept telling him where to go. The man said it was the GPS, whatever that might be. We headed further south from Fort Macleod, the country quickly took on an unused appearance. The hills were more frequent and steeper, and everything seemed a little drab. If I were someone’s horse I would have preferred live back north of Fort Macleod where the grass looked tastier and the idea of access to a barn in winter would be inviting. The man explained we were heading down a narrow corridor of land between the Peigan Indian Reserve on the right and the Blood Indian Reserve on the left. He also explained how we would soon come to Stand Off where we would enter and cross the Blood Indian Reserve. Stand Off was only a small town with no one to be seen. The town was quite spread out; the appearance of the houses gave the impression the people living here were very poor. The road started to become rather narrow and at times was quite twisty and steep. To the west the mountain range was now much closer such that the peaks appeared separated from each other, revealing the full extent of their individual ruggedness. As we turned over a hilltop we were presented with the most magnificent rugged mountain peek exposing itself directly in front of us. It seemed to climb out of the surrounding country like a huge solid flat top boulder with vertical walls on every side. The man explained this was Chief Mountain and while it looked close enough to touch it was actually some 25 kilometres away in the USA. He added this was the best place to view it and explained the mountain was steeped in Indian folk law being named out of respect for a Peigon War-Chief who’s family jumped to their death from the summit, to be reunited with him, after hearing of his death in battle. The road flattened out in a small but open valley and we came to the United States Border. We stopped and a large man in a uniform walked around and looked closely at me saying, “Hi there young fellow I hope you are not a stowaway because we will have to send you back if you are.” I panicked, but the man in the car quickly explained I was his daughters teddy bear my name was Bruiser and I was good company, well behaved and enjoyed travel. It worked, the uniformed man looked in the trunk and allowed us to proceed on our journey. I made it; nothing was going to stop me finding a new life now.
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