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Poetry as Fire
By Talisker
15 January 2007
I read a poem, dry tinder in my hands
in ardent hope that it contains a flint
to strike obliquely on my ironstone mind
thus to create a spark to catch and treasure
to gently, gently blow to glowing ember
which nurtured in my kindling cognition
becomes a flickering flame of inspiration
which grows into another blazing poem
wherein others come to dip their tapers
And take away a flame of understanding
To light their own fires of erudition
And even when the verse has burnt to cinders
There may remain a fragile glowing charcoal
To keep and blow and turn to warming fire


Oli 14/01/07

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Written by Witzl (1585 comments posted) 15th January 2007
This is exactly my idea of what a poem should be: something that kindles a flame, that stays with you as an inspiration, that pushes you to be a better human being and to try harder, and that brings with it some strong image, whether of beauty or weirdness or humor -- or whatever. You've got all of that here -- and managed to instill all of it into one poem. A real achievement.

Written by Phil (6635 comments posted) 15th January 2007
With you 100% Oli. Interesting though, what inspires one may bore another. It's those invisible buttons that lay like traps in poems, just waiting to be pressed and set you off. The last one I remember that really did it on here was 'The Harrisons.' Still smouldering yet. 
 
Phil. 

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