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Just looking for critiques... Ice Crystals A collision of mind, a crash of the soul, dissection of heart, I have lost all control. Languish of sight, power over feeling, rigorous struggle, no chance of healing. No negotiation, rape what you haunt, nightmare of shadows, take what you want. Fear of the fury, manipulate the pain, up-rise of anger, exorcise the sane. Death of innocence, no omission of guilt, onslaught of tears, in this life that I built.
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