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By Talisker
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17 January 2007 |
I may as well dip my toe, since its 5.10 a.m. and I'm not yet in the land of nod.
Fall upon and devour my heathen soul, thou pack of zen hounds!
oLI first snow of Winter taken in the dark hours morning rejoices Oli 17/01/07 |
sorry...
Written by no1butClo (337 comments posted) 17th January 2007 | i like it, but isn't it meant to be 5, 7, 5 in this form?
methinks mr oli needs to work on his scansion or whatever it's called in that blasted language calle english =P
*releases pack of zen hounds*
clo x |
Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 17th January 2007 | well i get 5,7,5....but then i never have been much good at counting syllables!
Liked it Oli though perversely i liked the pack of zen hounds best! Second line particularly good for me.
Elli |
Written by Phil (6393 comments posted) 17th January 2007 | Read with hours as two syllables Clo - ow-ers.
Yep, liked this too. Something special about a clean crisp morning.
Phil. |
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