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Non-Fiction
Turkey on Tuesday
By jean.day
19 January 2007
I know some of the punctuation is wrong. It sometimes goes into overwrite on me, and it is easier to leave a mistake that to rewrite the whole thing.

Tuesday dawned, fairly bright, fairly warm. We rushed to the bathroom to make sure we got the first of the hot water. But maybe it came later in Turkey. It sure wasn't there at seven in the morning. Cold wash - not brave enough for a shower. How I envied the people with the foresight to bring little heating elements or kettles with them. How I missed my morning coffee in bed. How I missed hot water to wash in. Too early for gin.

We decided to try the breakfast. It would be all right. Breakfast is meant to be cold. We walked down the steps and found a table laid out for self-service. We picked up cups and got tea, Turkish tea, which turned out to be fairly strong but not at all bad. Pat put milk in hers but my book said to avoid dairy products which probably had not been refrigerated, so I drank mine black with lots of sugar in it. Due to our dehydration we were very thirsty and managed five or six cups in quick succession each morning. I think the boy-waiters found us a bit unusual in our drinking habits. We didn't appear to drink anything at night, and we couldn't stop drinking in the morning. The choice for breakfast consisted of that same wholesome heavy bread, with little pots of butter (I avoided it) jam or honey and a cheese which looked like rather disgusting lard, cut in small squares. I didn't take any but Pat tried it and I took a crumb off her plate. The other item on the menu for breakfast was olives green rather scrawny looking olives - but rather tasty too. I had about eight each morning. As the week progressed and our breakfast fare was unvaried, I came to like goats’ cheese.

Having completed our breakfast, we made our beds and started out on our first adventure, to explore the little town, Cesme. We didn’t have a map or anything but as we were on the top of the hill and the sea was on the bottom, we couldn’t go wrong by going down hill in as straight a line as we could. We crossed the main road which had very little traffic on it  and then went down a steeply inclined field to a road being made up to accommodate two more hotels which under construction.. We were delighted to see a nanny goat heavy with milk, with her kid sticking quite close by, but trying the lower leaves of the trees as an alternative food source. We got a photo of them, plus a rather mangey flee-ridden donkey that lived in the field too. The field, like all the other ground around was very dry - the soil hard and cracked like concrete that's had something hard dropped on it. A few bits of green grass and weeds grew up through the cracks but lots of lovely wild flowers and poppies of a deep bluey-red.

Having come to the end of the field, we progressed up (wrong direction but only for a few feet) a narrow road with houses on both sides made of thick-walled brick/plaster/adobe/whatever. The building material looked hundreds of years old, and was crumbling in many places. The houses came up to the road - no pavements or garden in front. The road was wide enough for one car only in most places but traffic was not a big problem at any time in Cesme. We turned right again, slightly down hill, and were soon outside a primary school during recess time. The children aged about six to nine were all dreessed in black smocks with white collars. The boys too. Pat thought they looked too cute for words. I thought they looked like an anachronism. My impression of Turkish men had been one of overwhelming masculinity and these little Turks with the back-buttoning smocks looked to me like some Victorian English missionary’s idea of what little boys should wear. But they certainly were not feeling self conscious or uncomfortable in being appraised by strangers They all said, "hello" and giggled. We learned later that their English teachers encouraged them to talk to tourists to try and improve their English but few of the children could manage more than “Hello” and “What is your name?” and “How are you?” And when we replied, they were put in such confusion that they just giggled and rushed off.

Having passed the school, and faced with another junction, we walked slightly to the left again and still down hill past a few food and tourist shops. We looked in the windows but weren't tempted inside.

Having done that block; we had to cross a road which was festooned with ribbons and which was intended to be a pedestrian-only street - but as Caroline told us, the Turkish people had their own ideas about that. About five shops along we came to a carpet shop. I think it was the first one we had come to and,as I had a vague idea of buying a carpet, we stopped outside as I admired a particularly beautiful one hanging in the doorway. "Hello," said the shopkeeper. "How are you today? Are you English?"

“Yes,” we admitted and we praised his excellent English.

"Are you interested in carpets?" he asked? "Well, sort of," I admitted.

"How much is this one?" indicating the one that I'd so much admired.

“Ah,” he said, "Come into my shop and have a cup of tea and I will tell you all about carpets.”

" No," said Pat, “weve really got to get on. We have just arrived and we want to see everything before we buy. We will be back later.”
"Come on Pat.," I coaxed. There was something that drew me to this man, not his carpets but to him. I really wanted to keep talking to him. So Pat gracefully gave in and followed me into the shop. It. was dark and rather dingy in the shop, carpets on all the walls and piled in stacks. Nothing else for sale but carpets. All sizes, all shapes, all colours.

"Do you know anything about carpets?" he asked me.

"No, not a thing," I admitted.

"Well, this carpet you have chosen is a very good quality carpet. It. is silk, and has many thousands of knots in each centimeter.”

"How much?" I insisted. He paused and thought and did some fiddling on his calculator- £250 English pounds he came up with. My face fell. I would not be getting that carpet.

“Too much money for me,” I admitted.

"You have expensive taste." he said, grinning.

"What do you have that is cheaper?"

"Well," he said, "There, those kilims are our cheapest product,” pointing to a pile of woven thin rugs, but the lack of enthusiasm in his voice when talking about them left us in no doubt as to what he felt of their real worth. My guide book says kilims are carpets or rugs, handmade from wool using a technique that virtually hides the knots so that they lie perfectly flat.

"Then there are good quality carpets in smaller sizes," he said, pointing to a pile of carpets which measured about 18 inches by 3 feet. They were pretty too, but not nearly as pretty as my first choice.

“What do they cost?" I asked.

"Oh, much cheaper" he said, about a third of the cost of the large carpet I'd picked before. Well, we decided that a carpet was not something we were not going to rush into buying so we said we'd look around and come back later.

"Do come back," he said. "Come back to see me and have some tea with me, and just come to visit with me. You don't have to buy a carpet. I just like talking to you."

“Where did you learn your English?" Pat asked.

“I spent two years in .the States," he said, "in Texas, Alabama, California and Denver studying to be an air traffic controller when I was in the Turkish Air Force. I have been retired for many years now but my retirement pension is only £100 per month, and it is not enough to live on, so I sell carpets."

"Well, we must go now," we said, "but we'll come to see you later,"

"Yes, please do,” and I knew that I would go back no matter what Pat wanted to do. I felt drawn to this man and fascinated by him.

As we walked down the street, I turned back, and saw that he was standing outside his shop watching our progress, and he waved.

Reviews
jean day!!
Written by johniebg (553 comments posted) 19th January 2007
you frisky thing ... am tapping the keys in anticipation of whats going to happen next. 
 
I really enjoy the voice you create with these, I imagine, autobiographical tales. 'too early for gin' was a cracking line. 
 
I think a lot of their power will come from solar energy so early morning showers are not big, at least you never had a bucket of water stuck out in the sun waiting for the midday sun to warm, which is the sort of story your tales make me want to recount. 
 
I am interested to know (I am probably going to regret this); 
 
Where is Mr Jean.Day in all this? 
Is this a bridge outing and if so what ever happened to 'going to memphis' 
Do you live in England, you said you were english in this story, I thought you were USofA living in the same? 
 
Really enjoyed this, looking forward to a quick romp on the silk rug with mr retired air traffic controller, but guess my imagination is now running away from me :)

Written by Phil (6836 comments posted) 20th January 2007
This does have a kind of Shirley Valentine feel to it - I shall go no further! How would you get a large carpet on the plane Jean? 
 
Another very enjoyable piece. I think this had a lot more pace than the previous piece and was easier to get wrapped up in. 
 
Phil.

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 20th January 2007
Intriguing stuff Jean...I too am looking forward to what happens next. 
 
These autobiographical pieces of yours are really strong and stylish. Infact between you and witzl and patterjack I can go all around the world from the comfort of my sofa! Enjoying turkey :) 
 
Elli

Written by Fledermaus (3448 comments posted) 20th January 2007
Another charming traveling experience. So after Egypt it's now Turkey? What's most interesting about this one is that it focusses more on the small things, not the overwhelmingly exotic stuff, such as in your stories about Egypt, but rather the things which could have happened anywhere. 
At first I thought your carpet salesman was just luring you into his shop, but it seemed he was genuine when he said you didn't have to buy a carpet (or he must have been incredibly confident about his sales-technique)..

Written by Witzl (1585 comments posted) 22nd January 2007
Fledermaus and JBG are right: 1) 'too early for gin' is a great line, and 2) the small things make this charming.  
 
What I like about your travel stories is that they are just what I want to hear when I ask people about their trips to various places. Most of the time people will just give me very broad, sweeping generaliza- tions: 'Well, it was dirty,' or worse still, one-word answers: 'Hot.' What I want is the particulars -- especially about the people they met, conversations they had, etc. Your stories have a wealth of details, so I get a lot of pleasure out of reading them.  
 
And for heaven's sake, get that next installment out!

Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3444 comments posted) 23rd January 2007
I do hope you are not going to leave it there, Jean I'm sure there is more. I went to Turkey some years ago and know what you meant about the carpet sellers and I'm impressed that you got out of there without buying anything! and every carpet seller seems to be able to speak about 4 languages,too 
A really fascinating piece,written in you usual easy going style. You have a knack for picking out the highlights and presenting them so entertainly 
cheers 
J

Written by coosh (887 comments posted) 24th January 2007
Absolutely delightful - stuff the punctuation. Sometimes with travel tales you either get a dull as ditchwater narrator who doesn't deserve to be let loose on some of the wonders of foreign soil, or, conversely, several dozen photos of Trev, Denise and Uncle Wullie half-cut round some hotel swimming pool, grinning inanely through their radioactive orange tans. The balance between the level of characterisation in this piece and the description of the surroundings was excellent. Some lovely touches - "strong, but not at all bad", consulting the details on dairy products and kilims in the guide book, "didn't take any... but I took a crumb off her plate", etc. Fledermaus is right - the focus on the minutiae and the ordinary makes this work - never have hard-cracked soil, flea-ridden donkeys, and Turkish building materials been so entertaining. 
 
Also empathise with the second part of the piece - I too end up getting into conversations with all sorts of odd characters, just for the hell of it, find out who they are, what makes 'em tick, etc. 
 
Looking at some of the reviews, I think "too early for gin?" should become your catchphrase, or the title of your next novel. (Too early by what? Half an hour?) Thoroughly enjoyed and await more.
Thanks everyone
Written by jean.day (2326 comments posted) 27th January 2007
I've been away for a week, and what a lovely surprise on my return to find all these reviews.  
 
Johnibg - Mr. Jean Day was not on the trip to Turkey, not being an avid bridge player. I called myself English, as i often do, because it is easier when I am with a bunch of English people, but it doesn't take long for people to know that I am different from the way I talk.  
 
Yes, there is definately more to tell in this story, and Niazi, my carpet saleman was a very big part of it. I did buy a carpet in the end, but not a very big one. It fit in my suitcase. 
 
I'll sort out some more of the story soon. And after this week in Nerja I have yet another tale to tell.

Written by Witzl (1585 comments posted) 27th January 2007
We missed you!

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