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Is It LOVE???
By milz
20 January 2007
This poem is another masterpiece of my friends and I. We were able to turn it into a wonderful song. Love is like the rain. It gently pours. Sometimes it's raging fast. But why is the rain so special? Because like love, you can feel it but YOU CANT STOP IT.




it started one day
when i had this strange feeling
cant forget the way
you looked into my eyes
I just couldn't stop
dreamin' of you
I can feel something
I dont know why

Is it love Im feeling right now?
Is it love deep inside my heart?
Never felt this way before
                                         I dont wanna be apart from you

I saw you again
cant keep my emotions
wanted to face you
and tell the truth
I wish you were here,
together with me
Hope that you'd say
that you love me too

This is love I'm feeling right now!
This is love deep inside my heart!
Never felt this way before!
I don't wanna be apart from you!

Reviews

Written by Tusk (53 comments posted) 4th April 2007
It wasn't particularly bad poetry, it was just soppy. It sounds like a boy band song.

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