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| Angel, The Demon | |
| By milz | ||||||||||
| 20 January 2007 | ||||||||||
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Its true that you will regret things you have done in the past. Things you have done wrong. When that happens, You simply want to bring back the past but will forever be impossible. Thats why, take time to think of doing wonderful things so you can save your precious time. How many times have you regretted things you have done wrongly? There was once a girl named Angel, her name is simply ironic. She's very known in the village [not because of her name, a name that sounds kind]. She's known as the demon! The demon in every single person in the village. She smokes, drinks, always argues with her parents, she doesn't even go to her classes and lessons. Instead, she will go to computer shops and plays. She started living in a bad way when she had a fight with her mom and dad. "Why can't you make time for me?" Angel once said to them "What you only value are your business, your business!" "Angel, of course, youre our precious daughter. We value you the most." "You value me? huh? Then why do I go to school and go back home without even seeing anyone but our helper?" The argument continued and Angel started to begin with bad attitudes and habits. Because of this, her mom was really troubled and was really in great despair. She had sickness for several weeks and was confined in a nearby hospital but never did Angel visit there. Suddenly, her mom died because of such concern and worry for her one and only daughter. Angel thought her mom will always be there and will always be living FOREVER. Then she realize, her mom did something that a hero would do. Her mom did something that inspired and touched Angel's heart. Her mom left her because she want to change Angel into a better person. Angel cried and said: "If only I can bring back the past!" "Mom, you touched my heart!" "You made me see the light" "Thank you mom, Youre really a great mom!" "Youre sacrifice...I will not put them into waste!" "I will do my part!, I will change and I will be the person you want me to be!"
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