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| We Were Here | |
| By tabarejos | ||||||||||
| 20 January 2007 | ||||||||||
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i wrote this poem for our yearbook, but i got into a terrible argument with one of the yearbook coordinators (who asked me to compose a poem, mothaF) and i guess this poem will never make it into the book. this one sounds childish though. hope you like it. i appreciate reviews. we were here just yesterday a fleeting moment, a passing day a time of disintegrating years a generation, just right here sharing things we didn't have weaving dreams in hate and love knowing someday leave this place with laughter in each other's face faces we have learned to love faces of friends we didn't have remembering upon this day that we were here just yesterday. we were here, a troubled time running towards the blurry line undertanding our own faults truthful to what the future holds hopeful, but when tomorrow, at last everything is in the past remember, though, what we hold dear that for a moment, we were here. we were here not long ago a part of things we didn't know so much can not be undone so much time is almost gone tear-stained faces one by one we've lost count since we've begun the seconds turing into years bound in unrelenting fears that in this place we might not last now all these fears are in the past written by our oun understanding the future beyond, behold, it's shining we can hear its soft beckoning promising when all's done, one cold morning when all has to be remembered, and even when all has been forgotten and as all these lives slowly fade to black through this book we shall go back.
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