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Smile Inspite of The Sorrow
By milz
21 January 2007

Smiling is the best way to make others smile too. Smiling has always been easier. Smiling is the best lightning over sadness and sorrow. Smiling always wins over them.





Just because my eyes dont mist
Doesn't mean my heart doesnt cry

Just because i come out strong
Doesn't mean there's nothing wrong

Often, I choose to pretend i'm happy
So I can forget the sorrow deep within

Smiling has always been easier
Than explaining why i'm sad

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Written by Fledermaus (3448 comments posted) 22nd January 2007
The rythm was good, except for that of the second last line which seems too long. It could still be improved, but it's a nice poem.

Written by rilLie (327 comments posted) 22nd January 2007
wow.... emote ka na man! lol good poem, still :grin
yeah. THanks...
Written by milz (35 comments posted) 6th February 2007
:grin

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