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| 'The Mystery' Part 1 | |
| By milz | ||||||||||
| 21 January 2007 | ||||||||||
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Have you ever experienced receiving a news about the death of your best friend? How would you react if after the death, she became alive again? This story is combined mystery and tragedy about two best friends who love each other very much. THIS IS ONLY PART ONE OF THE WHOLE STORY Camp is the only word in Marie and Luisa's minds. They're really excited about the camping trip the school planned before the end of summer. These two best friends were preparing for this. They had their tent from Luisa's mom which they will use for the camping trip in California, U.S.A. With the things needed for the event, they are ready to go! --BEEP! BEEP! BEEP!-- "Marie! We're here to fetch you! Come on!" Luisa said while pressing the doorbell. "ok! coming!" They both went inside the car and Marie said "thank you Mr. Barry!" "Sure.No problem! Now are you all set and ready to go for the camping trip you've all been waiting for?" "yeah! very excited! extra-excited!" Luisa and Marie laughed. After several hours of travel...they're reached the destination and they all began to pitch their tents and fix their camping things. The students and the master-camper sang thieir songs around the campfire and everybody was having fun...Until it's very late midnight, and everybody was asleep... Marie heard Luisa getting out from the tent. "Hey, Luisa, where are you going?" "Oh, I just need some fresh air outside." "ok, but I better come with you" "No. No need. I can take care of myself. You better continue your goodnight sleep. I really hope you will have sweet dreams...like a dream with Johnny? just kidding." "Are you sure you dont need any companion outside?" "yeah." After a few minutes of peace and silence... "HELP! HELP! I NEED HELP! SOMEBODY!" a voice howled. Marie heard it and went out from the tent to follow the certain voice. "LUISA! Is that you? LUISA! ANSWER!" "Marie! help! I'm stuck! help!" Marie ran and ran and ran. Upon reaching the unbearable and tremendous cliff, she saw Luisa hanging on a tree. "Luisa! hold on! I will help you! I just need a rope! Wait there!" Marie saw a rope beside a rock and took it. "Reach the rope Luisa! reach the rope now!" Marie shouted with fright. "I cant! Marie! I cant! Aahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!" "NOOOOO!!!!!!!!! LUISA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Abruptly and unexpectedly, Luisa fell from the tree towards the very deep cliff and is found dead. >>>>To BE ConTinuEd<<<< wait for mystery part 2
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