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Van Speyk
By Fledermaus
21 January 2007
In Holland Van Speyk is considered a national hero, but I doubt if the Belgians think the same of him. I think that today he would be labeled quite differently.

Februari 1831,
Klaas looks at the tall houses along the quay. Their narrow fronts remind him of his native Amsterdam, but there is one big difference. There, he's one of them. Here he's besieged.
Their ships are floating in the middle of the broad river, anchored and on a safe distance from the shore. The whole city is in the rebels' hands now, except for the castle and this fleet. He has seen them on the quays, waving their tricolours and shouting slogans. Are these realy the same people they drank with a few months ago?

His thoughts drift off and he remembers that night in august. It had been warm and they had been to their favorite pub. 'The Flemish Lion'... Only now he realized the irony of a gang of Dutch sailors visiting that place.
He had kissed her and caressed her, Goedele, the barmaid. She was a chubby girl, with red curls and a friendly smile, but what had drawn him towards her was her voice. It was hoarse and low, but the soft Flemish sounds made it sound very feminine. She had embraced him in the hay behind the kitchen and they had made love.

Just the other day the news of the opera-riot reached Antwerp, but Klaas laughed about it.
" You southerners are much too passionate", he told her, upon which she grabbed him and kissed him fiercly.
That was more than half a year ago now and he hadn't seen her since, but she had promissed to wait for him. They would find a solution, but one of them had to convert.

The wind howls and the chains rattle. A sudden shock wakes Klaas from his daydream and he stumbles over the deck.
" We're loose!", a sailor cries and slowly the ship begins to move.
The Belgians have seen it too and a crowd assembles on the quay, big men, armed with clubs. As they drift towards them, Klaas thinks of the captain's speech.
" Death over dishonour!", he had cried and they had cheered. Captain Van Speyk is a brave man, who has destroyed the pirates in the Java-sea. He knew what he was talking about.

Klaas is worried. It seems a confrontation is inevitable. He wonders about the captain's words. Will he be ordered downstairs, to the cannons? Will they fight the rebels?

A Belgian brings his hands to his mouth and shouts.
" Take down the flag and surrender! We will spare you!"

Will they? The crowd has grown and Klaas is certain they can't fight them off. Moreover, the cannons are aimed too high. They are made for long distances and battles at sea, not for bombarding crowds. If they fire them, they'll only damage the buildings.

The quay comes nearer and nearer and it's only a matter of time before the ship crashes into it. The Belgians are preparing to board it. As soon as they are on the deck, the battle will be decided. If there will be a battle, that is, for it seems ridiculous to fight them. There are simply too many of them. Surely the captain was bluffing when he made that speech. No-one will blame him if they surrender now.

Then he hears a cry.
" He has turned mad! That captain has turned mad!"
" What happened?", Klaas asks the desperate sailor.
" He is pointing his gun at a barrel of gunpowder and muttering in himself."

The ship's hull rams into the quay and the Belgians cheer. They bring ladders and ropes and prepare to board.
Then an explosion sounds and nothing is heard for a long time. As the smoke clears, the ship is gone and burned corpses lay scattered upon the quays. Van Speyk sacrificed his crew and war is ahead...

Reviews

Written by Phil (6713 comments posted) 21st January 2007
Back to the history Fledermaus? You've picked a good incident here, full of polarised emotion. 
 
The first read of this left me a little confused until about half way through: exactly which side was Klaas on and whether he was on a ship or not was not made clear initially. I think if you made it a little more obvious in the first paragraph it would be a more fulfilling read. 
 
Enjoyed. 
 
Phil

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 21st January 2007
I think Phil is right - this seems like an intriguing incident and I enjoyed the read but was left a little bemused. Could bear a fair expansion I'd have thought. I like your forays into history though - generally learn a few things :) 
 
Elli

Written by coosh (865 comments posted) 22nd January 2007
I looked at the potted wiki history afterwards, and then re-read it.... and naturally it meant a lot more second time around. (Noticed some versions say he just tossed a "lit cigar" - which isn't nearly as exciting as firing at it). Presumably this has been well covered by Dutch (and Belgian) historians - there is no doubt a film or two as well. I liked the image of an "opera-riot"..... few dodgy arias, there's no knowing how these Flems will react. You write some very interesting historical pieces.

Written by Fledermaus (3281 comments posted) 22nd January 2007
Thanks Phil, Elli and Coosh. 
Phil and Elli - I can see where the confusion comes from. Indeed a few hints wouldn't hurt. I was too busy correcting typos and messing up tenses to notice I had been too vague. Thanks for the comments 
Coosh - Strangely enough I don't know of a film about the incident. It would be a golden oppurtunity for any beginning director I think, eventhough it doesn't have a happy end. The opera-riot is a strange incident indeed... Some songs sparked the independence of a nation... 

Written by Witzl (1585 comments posted) 22nd January 2007
Now I have a better understanding of why the Belgians seem to bear such a grudge against the Dutch. When I lived in the Netherlands I did my best to understand this, but it seemed to be a complex issue. I certainly remember many jokes made about the Belgians by the Dutch, and vice versa. There seemed to be a lot of good-natured badinage between the two groups, but always with an edge to it. 
 
I agree that you could have made this a little clearer -- I think the ending could be ten times longer than it is now and probably still be too short. I am grateful for the chance to read about historical events I have never heard of -- and there is no shortage of those.

Written by Fledermaus (3281 comments posted) 22nd January 2007
Hi Witzl, 
I don't think these events still have a large impact on a conscious level. The Dutch army even sent a division to the celebrations of 175 years of Belgian independence last year (even though we only recognized them 9 years later). 
But perhaps that grudge is a bit comparable to that of the Scottish against the English. The Belgians consider the Dutch arrogant and greedy, the Dutch consider the Belgians dumb and primitive. 
I always thought this had more to do with being neighbouring peoples (appearantly Swedes and Danes have it too, and I heard Canadians and Americans do the same), but who knows. It'd be interesting to do some research where these prejudices come from.

Written by Witzl (1585 comments posted) 22nd January 2007
Canadians think that Americans are gun-owning, polluting, insular, monolingual, pompous gits; Mexicans think that we are wasteful, elitist, Godless, hypocritical slobs who quickly forget their history. Americans think of Mexicans as lazy, greedy aliens who will stop at nothing to poach their wealth and social services. Americans hardly think of Canadians at all.  
 
Sometimes I think it is a wonder that people manage to get on with each other at all.
Hi Fledermaus
Written by jean.day (2279 comments posted) 28th January 2007
I was so pleased to see a bit of writing about history and thoroughly enjoyed this. I didn't know anything about this battle - nor about Belgians vs Dutch. I suppose being part Dutch myself I should make an effort to learn more about the country.  
 
I have to disagree with Witzl in the above comment. We Americans who lived close to Canada thought a lot about and of them. I think we felt more of an affinity for them than we did for New Yorkers, Texans or Californians.

Written by Fledermaus (3281 comments posted) 29th January 2007
Thanks Jean. 
It's a strange period in Dutch history. After the defeat of Napoleon the Dutch political system was completely changed. Instead of the Stadtholder there was a king (William I) and Belgium (which formerly belonged to Austria) was added to the Netherlands to create a powerful country north of France. 
Soon however the Belgians felt discriminated against, as the north was Dutch and mainly protestant and the south partly Waloon and mainly catholic. 
Then in august 1830 after seeing an opera about an uprise in Italy, the people of Brussels riotted and soon that revolution spread over Belgium and the Dutch were unable to stop it (this story takes place in februari 1831 and large parts of Belgium were firmly in the rebels' hands then). 
In august 1831 king William launched a counter offensive (the ten-days campaign), but soon the French entered the war and the Dutch had to sign a ceasefire. Belgium became independent, and the provinces Limburg and Luxemburg were split up. I think both sides claimed victory...

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