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Science Fiction and Fantasy
Orbs of Power
By Christ4Life
22 January 2007
This is my preface to a very.. hopefully interesting fantasy story! Hope you enjoy.

Preface
    The diamond orb was glimmering. It had a weird presence to it. It was full of mystery, light, and all that was good. It felt warm, the light. Even though it was the brightest form of light, even brighter than the sun, when you stared at it for a few seconds, it soothed your eyes and your mind. It was the greatest of them all: the Orb of Light.
    He watched as Chaos used his ultimate power and destroyed it. Instantly, everything turned black, and the orb that was once full of light turned into a black hole sucking everything in existence. It was horrible. The walls of the chamber caved in, and the shiniest glass floor instantly shattered into a million pieces, swirling into the abyss.
    The king watched in terror. His only hope left was to battle this field of darkness, which was nearly impossible to overcome.
    Then something unbelievable happened. The angels, millions of them, came around him and combined their energy with his. The light from his staff glimmered, even more brightly than the once beautiful diamond orb.
    Chaos was not shocked. He stood his ground, grasped his staff, and yelled out, “Devil’s Obliteration!” which echoed through the remains of the cavern. The king and his fellow allies, together, yelled out “Celestial Obliteration!” and the energy of light swirled around his golden staff. It was amazing, and a great sight. The black hole already began to suck up many of the angel’s robes, and the king grasped his staff harder as his light energy pierced Chaos’ dark energy. It was the ultimate battle between good versus evil.

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