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Nightmare
By maipenrai
22 January 2007
I have terrible horrific dreams, very, very vivid and real, this is one of them.

There must have been fifty of them
burning cars,
burning people running
screaming silent screams
on this highway of fire,
the stink of burning flesh
filled my head on this
summers night.

in the shadows
stood my long dead parents and grandparents
watching silently
as children burned and
mothers wept tears of flame,
my parents held aloft babies
in their skeletal arms
for me to see before the
flames consumed all.

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is this
Written by tabarejos (21 comments posted) 22nd January 2007
A real nightmare? Or a poem about? =)
Nightmare
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 22nd January 2007
A Real Nightmare, I sadly get many, they wake me up, I get a drink and make notes of what I have dreamt 
 
Thanks for your comment 
Bernie
wtf
Written by tabarejos (21 comments posted) 22nd January 2007
You know what, I do the same. Everytime I have nightmares (or dreams that are very significant) I immediately note them down on my phone, so as to not lose the important beautiful details. 
 
I am really curious as to how my mind works and studying my dreams helps me know. 
 
It’s surprising I’m not the only one… 
Nightmare
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 22nd January 2007
to tell the truth i find it a wee bit scary some of the stuff i dream, make's me wonder what the hell is going on in my head
exactly
Written by tabarejos (21 comments posted) 22nd January 2007
dreams are the way you think subconsciously. and it's scaring me that i always dream of obscene stuff.

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 22nd January 2007
Well im glad this wasnt one of my dreams. The final few lines cast a powerful if highly disturbing image. 
 
Elli

Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 22nd January 2007
I dream in jibberish - never understand a thing. As Elli, glad this was yours and not mine. 
 
This immediately brought to mind something I was reding about the other day, I fact there was something on here about it too. Some road in Iraq I think that the Americans bombed when there were loads of peopke fleeing - I forget the details. Perhaps you'd read or heard about the same thing. 
 
Last four lines the most powerful. It's often the personal or specific that bring home the horror in the general. Does that make sense? 
 
Phil. 
 
nightmare
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 23rd January 2007
thanks guys for your comments 
Bernie
phil
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 23rd January 2007
the road I think was given the name the"road of death" by the press, it was in the first Gulf War , the Iraqi Army was retreating from Kuwait.

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