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Please Don't Try And Kiss Me |
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By maipenrai
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22 January 2007 |
the whore's lament Please don't try and kiss me, you have garlic breath and rancid and rotting teeth, you can fuck me, take me anyway you wan't but Please don't try to kiss me. |
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Written by tabarejos (21 comments posted) 22nd January 2007 | how cruel...cruel because it happens.
i don't want to even begin to remember those times... |
Written by Fledermaus (3246 comments posted) 22nd January 2007 | | The rythm is good and it made me laugh. :D |
Written by Fledermaus (3246 comments posted) 22nd January 2007 | Oh, I didn't readthe intro. I can see the serious side of this  |
Written by Phil (6683 comments posted) 22nd January 2007 | Simple on the surface, but layered. Pretty moving. Very effective.
Phil. | Please Don't Try And Kiss Me
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 23rd January 2007 | thanks guys for your comments.
Bernie |
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