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Adrienne my love
By balthazar
22 January 2007
I wrote this poem for my girlfriend on her 20th birthday, she liked it, tell me what you guys think!

Adrienne my love

You are my heart, my Adrienne, my love
I hope that we can be together forever, the long road
Until we wind up dead, with wings, above

No-one knows me as well as you
I pray that we can be this close, such good friends, always
You are my heart, my soul-mate, I cannot wait for the day we say I do

You are my heart, my Adi, my baby girl
My little princess, and chef
Who makes the best chocolate mousse cake, with the best chocolate swirls

You are my heart, my Adrienne, my love
And I will try to love you, as you love me, thoroughly,
Without question, unconditionally
So that we can be together forever, the long road
Until we wind up dead, with wings, above

Reviews
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Written by tabarejos (21 comments posted) 22nd January 2007
 
if this is a real loveletter for a real Adrienne, then this is mushy, the good kind. 
 
if this is mockery, then this is genius. 
oh
Written by tabarejos (21 comments posted) 22nd January 2007
I'm sorry, i didn't read your introduction. 
 
So Adrienne is real after all.

Written by Phil (6645 comments posted) 22nd January 2007
Very mushy, but I'm not surprised Adrienne loved it - for the sentiment alone. 
 
Phil.

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