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By maj
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16 June 2005 |
Tears line my face like the raindrops from heaven, as my ship is devoured by the ocean blue. The torrent waves drown my dreams. In silence, i sit and watch. Helplessly within my mind, i search for a harbour to anchor my soul. Lost. So very lost. So once again i set sail on another ship. Maybe this time, the waves will be calmer. |
lost Written by sheppard (36 comments posted) 16th June 2005 | | I like this Maj, and wished that it was longer, but can see why you finished there, I felt like this about 4 years ago! | Written by maj (20 comments posted) 16th June 2005 | thanks. it was a time of real indecision for me-sometimes i think it still is! | Written by no1butClo (337 comments posted) 1st June 2006 | I really like this piece maj. Although I don't have experiences to relate it to, it reminds me of the beginning of Twelfth Night "What is this place..." etc. It brings across a feeling of hopefulness, coupled with the inevitable knowledge that nothign lasts forever... should be confusing, but as humnas, it's pretty much what we are x clo x |
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