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First Love #3 Angela
By Phil
22 January 2007
Junior School, mid seventies.

First Love #3 Angela


Blonde and aloof,
She never forgave me
When it became clear
I knew my nine times table
And she didn’t.

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Written by rilLie (327 comments posted) 22nd January 2007
wow.. lol. enjoyable read. looking forward to #4 :grin

Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3294 comments posted) 23rd January 2007
Funny what's important at that age, just before the hormones kick in and things like that then go right out the window. 
J

Written by Talisker (1321 comments posted) 24th January 2007
Most blondes never learn their nine-times table :grin

Written by Fledermaus (3238 comments posted) 24th January 2007
Heheheh... Are you going to make a book of these?
good un
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 29th January 2007
:grin :grin
good un
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 29th January 2007
:grin :grin

Written by brook_rivers (484 comments posted) 31st January 2007
Haha! Good post! But Tal i'd be careful with you comments!! ;)

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