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First Love #4 Bog Eyes
Written by Phil
23 January 2007
High school, late seventies.

First Love #4 Bog Eyes


Unattainable
Due her superior years
And blood pressure inducing beauty,
I did the only thing I could to get noticed:
I insulted her.
She took me to the bottom of the field
And tortured me.

Reviews

Written by rilLie (5 comments posted) 24th January 2007
sweet and funny. :grin looking forward to number 5 :D

Written by Talisker (1367 comments posted) 24th January 2007
Was that "kiss, cuddle or torture"? 
 
You were a bit of a school Lothario, were you not? 
 
Enjoying these, great fun and touching at the same time. 
 
Oli :grin

Written by JourneyAtNight (355 comments posted) 24th January 2007
Have enjoyed all of these Phil - you heartbreaker you!;) 
 
Best wishes 
 
E

Written by ellipinnock (1816 comments posted) 24th January 2007
Another good one Phil - what kind of torture that's what I want to know... 
 
Elli 
 
:grin

Written by Fledermaus (4146 comments posted) 24th January 2007
LOL. 
Sometimes insulting DOES work...

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