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pitiful poets
By maipenrai
16 June 2005
To be taken with a large pinch of salt

Have you ever noticed

how some of us poets

have something of the

Drama Queen about us

 

Its My pain, My suffering

It is becauseof My

sensitivity, creatitivity

that I suffer so much

 

I find it pitiful

to read pitiful poems

the poet so much in love

withtheir own pain and suffering

 

lets be honest !

I do not knowwhat you readers

have suffered or how much pain you endure

and do I care?

 

but I am willing to bet

it is like a pinprick compaired to an

amputationto compare

your pitiful pain, suffering, angst and worry

 

TO MINE

 

 

 

 

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Written by maj (20 comments posted) 16th June 2005
 
Its like my mother says...everyone thinks that their burden is the heaviest! :grin
thanks
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 16th June 2005
thanks maj for your comments

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