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The Message
By patterjack
25 January 2007
It  was a  very  cold   winter   in  England  in 1979 ,  and  although, ( disappointingly   to  a  pair   of   winter - expectant   sun -drenched   Aussies  ) ,    it  did  not  snow   very  much  in the  first   two  weeks   we  were  in   London  ,  the  weather was  somewhat  grey  and  drizzly in the   presumably normal   British  tradition.

After  our  first   fortnight   there  and   after  the  setting  up  of   future  plans about  surveying  drama   ,  we believed  we  had    to  move  out  of  the  private  hotel  we  were   inhabiting ,  to  allow    the  proprietress  , a  lovely  Welsh  lady  ,  her  own  Christmas in  Wales.    In  fact  ,  we  found  out  that  she  would  have  been  willing  to  let  us  stay as  the  only residents   ,  and  at  a  later  time   in  the  year for a  different  occasion  we  were  able  to  do  just  that.   

This   was  one  of  the  two  most  welcome  occurrences   among   many, many  others  during   those   first  two  weeks in  England  .  The  warmth  of  her  welcome   and  her   generosity  was   matched   by  the  fact  that   for  a  couple  of  minutes  after  we  left  Heathrow ,  the  sun had actually   shone  !

As  it  was  ,  however ,  we  took  the  opportunity  to  begin  a  trek  through   unknown  parts   for  us .  I  wanted  to  go  south   ,  if  only   to  see  the  town  of  Mousehole   ,  a  name  that  had  caught  my  fancy while looking  at  maps  .  The  wife  wanted  to  go  north  .

So  York  it  was  .

No  regrets  at all  about  that  --  and   Mousehole  was  still  there  later  in  the  year .

Wonder  of   wonders   to  us  , no  sooner   had  we   ensconced  ourselves  in  a  boarding  house  just  outs1de   the  gates  of  York ,  than  it began  to  snow-- a  light  ,  fluffy  fall   that  gradually  grew  sporadically  heavier   during  our  week    there  .  It did  not  snow   heavily  ,  nowhere  near  as  heavily as  it  did  when  we  later  moved  down  to  Lincoln ,  but apparently there  was  enough  further  upstream  to  turn  the  Ouse   into  a very  flooded  river  .

We  didn't   care   ;    it  was  all  new  to  us ,  and  it  led  to a  couple  of  interesting   ,  and   in  this  case  sequential  , situations .  We  visited   all  the  major  sights   of  York , and as  we  were  carefully feeling  our  way  in  regards  to  finances   , we  purchased  a  very  large  sized  pork  pie  ,  which  he  hoped  would  do  for   our Christmas  dinner .

However   ,  on   Christmas   Day  ,  we   went  walking  out  of   the  town  area   ,  into  the  country  side.    About  noon  ,  we  came  to  a rural  pub  which  had  just  opened  its   doors  as seems  to   fit  the  strange  hours   of   English  hostelries   and  I  suggested   ,  as  is  my  wont   ,  that  we  sample  the local  ale.   So  in  we  went  ,  to  sit  before a  huge   fireplace  with a  huge   fiery   log ,  and  ordered  a  couple  of   beers.

At  that  point  ,  a  lilting  Welsh  voice   enquired  as  to  whether  we  were  Aussies --  if  he  judged  our  accents aright .  We  admitted  to  that  sin  ,  to  be  informed  that   he  had  been  a  saiior ,  had  spent   much time  in  Melbourne  and  loved   Oz .

During  the  afternoon of  chat   we  found  out  that  he  had  been a  jazz  drummer  as  well   as a sailor  and  many  another  odd  occupation too.  Naturally ,  he  was  related   to  Gareth  Evans   and  every  other   famous  Welsh   Rugby  Union  player   .  He  introduced  me  to a  drink   till  then  unknown  to  me  --  rum  and  blackcurrant   very  suitable   for  the  weather ,  but   each  drink  was  met  with  the sailors' toast   *   Rum  ,  Bum   and  Baccy *  .  

He  must  have  been  taken  with us  ,  for as  the pub  with  its  strange   hours  closed  for a  time  ,  he  invited  us   to  return  that  afternoon  ,  have a  drink  with  his family  and then  come  down  to  his  home   for   mince  pies  and  other Christmas  delicacies   .  Such  an  invitation  on  our  first  week  in  England  could  not  be  refused ,   so  we  came back  later  and  met  the  tribe  ,  a  lovely  lot  of   people .  When  the  pub  closed   we  were   driven to  his  home  ,  and   indeed   the  mince  pies were both  home  made  and  delicious.

By  midnight  or  later   we  were  all  aglow  ,  but  it  was  time  to  get  back  to  the  boarding  house   ,  so   his  son-in-law   offered  to  drive  us  there.  With  black  ice ,    a   snow   storm  and a   would -be  racing   driver  at  the  wheel  , we  were  grateful  to  make  it safely .

Boxing  Day  was   ,  to  say the  least ,  a  bilious   one   for  the  wife  --  she  could  not  face  any  more   pork  pie !   I  have a  much  more   hardened   stomach .   While she  slept  I wandered  out  to  see  if  I  could  take  in   my first  game  of Football  at  the  York  ground  .  There  I  found  out  two  facts  ,  that  York  was  in  the  Fourth  Division  (  though  as  one  of  the local  police at  the  game  informed me  *  They  do  have  their  mooments *    )  and  that  there   were more police  in  the crowd  than  there  were spectators .

I  decided   I  could  wait  to  watch a  later  First  Division game ,  preferably  one  with Stoke  on  Trent   playing    since  that  was my father's  city's team .     Therefore   I wandered  up  to  the  York  Minster  and  into    building .

As  I  stopped   before  the  famous  Rose  Window   and  looked  up   ,  the  sun  came  out  for  the  second   time  in  our  stay in  England    .  The sight  of the  array  of  colour   penetrating   the  gloom  of the  Minster was   an  incredibly  moving  experience ,  and  it  is  to  my  regret  that  my  wife had missed  it . 

I  have wondered  since   if  the  deity  had  been  trying  to  send   me  a  message. 

He  might  have  done  better   speaking   to  the   wife  .

Reviews

Written by Witzl (1585 comments posted) 25th January 2007
This is funny, Patterjack. I liked the fact that you wanted to go to Mousehole for nothing other than its wonderful name, and your wife wanted to go north -- 'So York it was.' Brilliant. Maybe your could give me a few pointers sometime; I tend to lose in situations like this, and I have all the good ideas.  
 
I once lived off fried eggs, rice and coca cola for three days in Guatemala as that was all there was to eat in the small village where I was. I might have been interested in pork pie on the third day, but for the most part, I share your wife's feelings about it: a little goes almost too far.  
 
Great last sentence, by the way, and I'll bet even your wife finds this funny now.

Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3362 comments posted) 26th January 2007
A really great read. I so enjoyed this. It's really interesting seeing someone experiencing the country as a foreign place. I liked the style too- no attempt at florid descriptions just the facts and of course the sub text which spoke volumes i.e the fact that you obviously charmed everyone you met there and managed to get invited back for food and drink on Christmas day, and in York for heavens sake!!! Trust me that is unusal When the Aussies turn that easy charm full on no-one is safe. 
Tell me did you manage to free-load your way right round England [only joking] 
Great fun and written with such a light touch 
cheers 
J

Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 26th January 2007
I don't think the sun has been out since 1979. We can't play cricket (or rugby, or football, or anything else at the moment) but we're the world champions at grey skies and drizzle. 
 
Enjoyed your piece very much. Interested to know what you made of Lincoln. I lived there for four years and thought it a lovely but thoroughly boring place. 
 
Phil.

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