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By Phil
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29 January 2007 |
High school, early eighties. First Love #9 Julie
Only ever admired from afar,
Her legs were legendary:
Long, smooth, flawless
And topped with
The epitome of pertness.
They fired many nocturnal adventures.
(At least amongst us fourth form boys) |
Written by Talisker (1331 comments posted) 28th January 2007 | Becoming less poetic and more "organic".
Love it !
oli | HI Phil
Written by jean.day (2366 comments posted) 29th January 2007 | I've read all these love poems now - and reading them all together at once was great fun.
I wonder if any of your previous loves will read these lines and recognise themselves in them. |
Written by Fledermaus (3489 comments posted) 29th January 2007 | | And there the young Phil grew less romantic. Nice poem though. Seems you had quite a lot of crushes! | These lucky girls, immortalized in verse
Written by Witzl (1585 comments posted) 29th January 2007 | These remind me just a tiny bit of that Julio Iglesias song -- but only a tiny bit, and they are, I hardly need to say, better.
I wonder if anyone I knew from high school is saying 'Whatever happened to her, that skinny girl with the bushy hair and awful clothes? What was her name, anyway . . .?' Somehow I doubt it. |
Written by ellipinnock (1786 comments posted) 29th January 2007 | Loved it - especially the epitome of pertness!! I'll be sad when you're done with these 
Elli |
Written by ellipinnock (1786 comments posted) 29th January 2007 | Loved it - especially the epitome of pertness!! I'll be sad when you're done with these
Elli | A pandemic of lovers
Written by Marybarry (237 comments posted) 29th January 2007 | Greetings phil,
Where do you find time to write???
How do you remember all the names????
Do you have a little black book?????
I loved your Nineology of love poems.
Trinny |
Written by wltshr (352 comments posted) 14th October 2008 | Thank you to the work awaiting review section. Very enjoyable.
But, dammit, I've got to find the others now.
Cheers
Wltshr
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Written by Katanga (1515 comments posted) 14th October 2008 | With Wltshr, I look forward to finding the others!
Great piece!
And thanks for your resent 'psychological' comments on my recent effort - not amateur at all, very much to the point!
Cheers!
John |
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