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Bombardment
By Dilbert
18 June 2005
Some times people just don't get the message

 

I'm waiting for your bombardment

Waiting for your anger to vent

Waiting for you to lay the blame

Waiting for you to name and shame

 

Oh I understand the fault is mine

 I just shut up and hear you whine

I just close my eyes and wish you away

I just sit and hope for a better day

 

And then one day I'll open my eyes

Realise you've said your goodbyes

Realise you've walked out that door

Realise I don't have to put up with you any more

 

And then

And then I smile

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Written by kevinrobson73 (371 comments posted) 19th June 2005
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Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 19th June 2005
very good piece

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