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| Rebirth | |
| By amoryblaine | ||||||
| 29 January 2007 | ||||||
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There,heaven born,do you see kind sir? Whispering her song,shy and removed Embracing still all that surrounds her No divides here,between the fine and the crude. There,we may speak and be heard By her alone if that may be She stops and listens to even that one bird That desires to be truly free. She peers into your soul as she passes you by Her beaten hair dancing in mock distress Like the dark strokes of a calligrapher against the sky Asleep or dreaming?is it sir,that i find this princess. The critic unmoved,shrugs and departs beyond the mountain crests Absorbed in memories of surer things Like the smell of a woman's soft,supple breasts And everything else that a smile brings. Lucid and decidely slippery This vision appears But i can see this young girl with an ancient face;freely Dancing to the music of the spheres. Beads of sweat like rosaries Are soaked in by the silk she adorns And patches born on the white of her dress agree That i too must wear proudly my crown of thorns. Tears soak her wetted breast , her splattered blouse embraces her figure and form I try not to stare as i can best For her this beast in me must transform. Kissed by the God of love that night i died And awoke to a bright mid-day sun And still i look for the girl who cries With whom i had a story begun!
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