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Colourful

By pasinger

29 January 2007

Acrostic poem.
Appreciate the simple and free things in life.

Colourful skies of every hue,
Oceans stretch a beautiful blue.
Lands of red and black rich soil,
Oats and barley, a farmer’s toil.
Undulating hills and plain,
Rewards from nature, human gain.
Fun and laughter both are free,
Ugly, beautiful choose one to be.
Love everlasting for you and me

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We meet again.
Written by Marybarry (237 comments posted) 29th January 2007

Greetings Pasinger,
lovely to meet you here. Talisker is also here.
I liked your poem.
As always a beautiful use of the English language. marybarry

acrostic AND rhyme, wow -
Written by fellpony (1717 comments posted) 29th January 2007

I thought such things had vanished from the earth. Not sure about the end, where the sentiment has had to give way to the rhyme/acrostic scheme, but a most unusual form. Well done!

Written by Fledermaus (3489 comments posted) 29th January 2007

Wow! This is great!

Written by Phil (6963 comments posted) 29th January 2007

With Fellpony on this one - the last line let it down a little. Otherwise a nice poem. I can see this in a certain type of children's anthology.

Phil.

Colourful
Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 29th January 2007

A good write which I enjoyed.

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