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JAZZ AT THE “CLUB SESTINA”
By CliffBowes
30 January 2007
Charlie Parker - Bird, has, in my opinion,  been the greatest influence on jazz ever. His tragically early death in 1955 was a great loss to modern music.

 

         Sweet tones of tenor sax, so cool.
          A slapping bass lays down the beat.
          A drum kit echoes in the night.
          The room is dark; the music loud.
          Two-hundred souls, all feeling blue
          Shuffle and spin to the offbeat rhythm.
 

          A rippling piano finds the rhythm,
          I’ve never heard ‘Laura’ sound so cool,
          With her lipstick smile and mascara, blue.
          Dizzy, “à la sourdine,” is really hard to beat,
          But when he’s loud, man he’s really loud;
          Please Dizzy, please, play all night.
 

          One star not shining on this night
          Is ‘Bird’ the alto-playing saint of rhythm.
          He left the stage before this set got loud.
          The needle damage and the bourbon cool
          Fed the habit that he couldn’t beat.
          Charlie Parker - you painted this town blue.
 

          Strange smoke turns the air pale blue,
          The acrid smell invades the night,
          Sharpening your senses to the pounding beat
          And the subtle changes of the rhythm.
          “Cool Blues”, “Ornithology”, and “Something Cool”.
          “Bird lives - Bird lives”, cry it out loud.
 

          Says trumpet tongued Dizzy as we shout out loud,
          “Let’s take this in B flat, ‘Why am I Blue?’”
          The hour grows late and the air grows cool,
          An open door lets in the night.
          This same door lets escape the rhythm
          Which tumbles out with a heavy beat.
 

          Four to the bar - starting on the up-beat,
          Unappreciated by those who talk too loud.
          Syncopated hoodoo, voodoo rhythm,
          Blowing your horn like ‘Little Boy Blue’.
          A gentle dawn sweeps away the night,
          While a gentle rain turns the sidewalks cool.
 

          “Bird lives” written in letters blue,
          Graffiti secretly scrawled at night.
          Untrue - at thirty-five he died. Un-cool.

Reviews
Nice....
Written by Talisker (1321 comments posted) 30th January 2007
I enjoyed reading this, not because it was a "great poem" in my opinion (sorry), but because it is a great heartfelt tribute. 
 
I did a similar tribute to Jimi Hendrix a few months ago.  
 
Although not a jazz afficianado, by any means (I do like Miles Davis, Schofield, Larry Carlton, Steely Dan) I can appreciate the love of music expressed here.  
 
A very worthy effort Cliff, I look forward to reading more. 
 
Oli :)
Jazz
Written by Marybarry (237 comments posted) 31st January 2007
Greetings Cliff, 
 
A wonderful story told in this poem. I loved it. 
 
I used to go to Ronnie Scotts in Soho, donkeys years ago. 
 
Charlie Parker was fantastic, but I love Miles Davis. 
 
You did a wonderful job on this work. marybarry

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 6th February 2007
Liked this - good sestina - not a form I've ever gotten to grips with! Thought you struggled a little finding natural ways of getting blue in each verse but apart from that it read very naturally. 
 
Enjoyed the read. 
 
Elli

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