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Fairytale Endings
By bloodange77
30 January 2007
I wrote this while someone was shooting me down with their words. I had broken up with him. So I hope it's okay....

>Once upon a time,
You fell in love.
>Trust existed but,
Did you trust it?
>In the end,
All you have is pain.
>He wants to hurt you,
He tries to hurt you.
>Says he doesn't,
Want you to cry.
>The beginning is,
Just the ending.
>Happily Ever After,
Is just another fairytale.

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Feelings
Written by Marybarry (237 comments posted) 31st January 2007
Hallo, 
 
I'm no poet BUT I love to write poetry. 
I am old fashioned in my taste in poetry. 
 
I LIKED YOUR POEM very much you expressed feelings. 
Feelings that I have known. 
Is that poetry? Some on this site would say NO. The technical ability is missing. 
Because of this I am taking a rest from poems. 
 
YOU CARRY ON. marybarry

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