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By Phil
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31 January 2007 |
Middle to late eighties. School, college. First Love #12 Sue
It began with two children
And simple kiss
On a November chilled cheek.
Five years on we were
Adults.
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Written by Clifftown (620 comments posted) 31st January 2007 | | I read this, and then just had to go back and read the rest of them, one by one! A great idea, and great fun to read. I really do enjoy your poems. | Hi Phil
Written by jean.day (2279 comments posted) 31st January 2007 | Yes, I have enjoyed each and every one too, and they are all so different - you have captured a bit of the personality of each.
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Written by Talisker (1326 comments posted) 31st January 2007 | Still following these. Still great fun poems. Also touching and tender.
Oli  |
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3351 comments posted) 31st January 2007 | Still enjoying them,not much more to add except that the subtext here is that you must have been a bit of Casanova on the quiet, I think.
I bet you had a bit of a rep as the Bolton Stud!
cheers
J |
Written by JourneyAtNight (314 comments posted) 31st January 2007 | This is lovely, I love "november chilled cheek".
What happend to #11?
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Written by Fledermaus (3281 comments posted) 31st January 2007 | | Adults after 5 years of college, do you think so? |
Written by Phil (6713 comments posted) 31st January 2007 | Okay, rumbled. She was, I probably wasn't.
Thanks for your comments. |
Written by rilLie (327 comments posted) 31st January 2007 | | lol.. enjoyed every one of these. this no exception. |
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