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storm inside
By cordialfreedom
03 February 2007
hello,
some of my older stuff,i`m starting to realise,doesn`t make much sense.
Probably writen at 3 in the morning on a long night shift.
nevermind. 


There is no scream that can tell of the
storm inside,
of the torent of turmoil that comes along for
the ride,
hitchiking on the back of a blank compliant face,
that listens and nods in just the right place.

But mine is the loudest,
and to them so is theirs,
for we all hide the need to let the world know,
don`t ignore me or override me.
for you are not the only right

There is no sream,that could not go unnoticed.

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Written by Tusk (53 comments posted) 5th March 2007
Is the misspelling intentional, because it is done. 
I loved the line:  
"hitchiking on the back of a blank compliant face" 
...brilliant. 
 
You get the message across perfectly and I understand what you are saying.

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