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Shoebox Grave
By bwoz
04 February 2007
Grandmother and grandaughter spending quality time.

They surveyed the garden, Emily and Avis
To find just the right place to dig
A nice spot beneath a big beech tree
They knelt in the sweet grassy shade
“About two feet deep, that’s all we need
With sides long and wide and straight”
Their shovels were spoons from the kitchen,  
The soft earth, a shoebox grave.

They dug through sand and soft soil,
Cool and moist in the southern air
And Emily unearthed a silver ring,
Avis wiped it clean, said “Well lookie here!”
Then Emily found ten toy army men,
A subterranean war waged for years.
“Will someone dig up what we burry, Gran’ma?”
“Maybe. But old bones are what they’ll find here.”

Reviews

Written by Marybarry (237 comments posted) 4th February 2007
\\\\\\a subterranean war waged for years, I liked that line. 
A very pretty poem, good quality time for the two.marybarry,

Written by Talisker (1321 comments posted) 4th February 2007
Nice little poem, evocative of childhood innocence and wonder. Well done. 
 
Oli :)

Written by Phil (6635 comments posted) 4th February 2007
Yep, liked this too. Reads well, paints a nice picture. 
 
Phil.
Thanks all
Written by bwoz (125 comments posted) 5th February 2007
Appreciate the warm welcome, my first posting on this site. I will be in and out often, seems like a lot of good heads in here -- what I mean is adults. 
 
BW

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