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The Least of His Creatures
By Talisker
05 February 2007
The first of a series on the absurdity of religion.


“As you treat the least of my creatures,
thus do you treat me”, he said.

So now I put out lettuce for the slugs,
and smear jam on my windows,
for the wasps.

Oli 5/2/07

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Written by Marybarry (237 comments posted) 5th February 2007
Talisker, who the hell is going to treat you when the slugs eat your vegetables and you suffer vitamin deficiency. 
OR when covered in stings you cant sleep???????????? 
 
Do unto others what they do unto you---BUT--- 
 
DO IT FIRST. 
Patricia the bad Samaritan

Written by Phil (6713 comments posted) 5th February 2007
Are we to treat tape worm? I only ask as I have a rather itchy... 
 
Worked for me Oli. 
 
Phil.

Written by Fledermaus (3281 comments posted) 5th February 2007
Hahaha. Good one!
Dogs and tapeworm
Written by Marybarry (237 comments posted) 5th February 2007
HI, 
Our dogs scratch their arses along the carpet, espc, the rough carpet in the hall. That could help Phil. 
Glad to be of help. 
Trinny

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 5th February 2007
Tried to review this last night but my masterpiece about being smeared in jam clearly got lost in the post... 
 
Never mind eh - this time round I won't try to be clever, just say I liked this :grin  
 
Elli

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