|
| READING ROOM | ||||
|---|---|---|---|---|
|
| COMMUNITY | |||
|---|---|---|---|
|
| ABOUT GREAT WRITING | ||
|---|---|---|
|
| WORK AWAITING REVIEW |
|---|
|
| GW IS... |
|---|
|
Great Writing creative writing community is designed to prompt ideas
and provide inspiration and motivation within aspiring and amateur
authors. Whatever your topic; from love poetry to Doctor Who or Harry
Potter fan fiction, Great Writing's online writing group is where you
can make new friends and improve your creative writing. |
| WHO'S ONLINE |
|---|
| We have 1375 guests online and 6 members online |
| print friendly version | |
| Lost Weekend | |
| By francoise | ||||||
| 07 February 2007 | ||||||
|
Thats better! Not sure about the title, and structure.. still wondering if this is abit too elusive in meaning or not..... Fran :-) We drove out to the sea to collect our thoughts. But I'd already left mine behind. The list of things to repair fell out of my hands when you asked me to hold you at the traffic lights. Divided and inbetween the commitment to our well oiled machine, The cogs turn to drive us steady-a balance between moderated feelings and the fuel of passion. You regulate speed with my desire to exceed it. Fuelled with trip after trip Gallons of sunstroked acres Scattered villages and crooked country lanes. We feel the sharp turns soften everytime a light catches our eyes and catches our years until this point. Eucalyptus trees line the last length of our journey together. Tall and magnificent, branches stirring the sky, Gentle witnesses to how lost and small we are as we meander across great layers of dark earth. I close my eyes. They are bathed at once by tissues of blood and sunlight, The glow of a Rothko The mottled flash of forest and sky. I open them. We've stopped at a great view. But all I can see is our abandoned car. A shell against the skyline.
Only registered users can rate and write comments. Powered by AkoComment 2.0! |
||||||
|
|
Next item
|
|---|