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another work-a-day, Oli? help me out here guys... I can't work out how to finish it off, it needs one more stanza but i'm not sure what sort of note to leave it on... We have space, in this city, to spread out. There is no need to coil our houses round each other, or bury clean-cut lawns in concrete. It is possible to use perspective, create pinprick horizon at the end of streets, rainbowed with graffitti. There is room to be diverse: take a pinch of glass, combine with sandstone, add acid rain and call yourself a city. Next, mix in tar- macadam, road signs to everywhere from Brent Cross to St. Pauls. These new glass boxes show us a view of plastic ants, scurrying round their nine-to-five, inversions of the nymphs and fauns, carved and dancing far below. Their prime was two thousand years ago in the mind of some Grecian artisan. The river creates a foreground for silver nodules, slivered metal, a cut-off for this overflow of people and ideas, architects drawings sprawling, coloured in.
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